Join the Ranks

[02moonpelt02]

Please use the form below (copy & paste) to join and reply to this thread. I will review your application, tell you if it needs tweeking, and once it is fixed, I will put you in the ranks! Thanks!

-Application-
Name: Self-explanatory
Gender: Male/Tom or Female/She-cat?
Rank Wanted: Warrior, Apprentice, Queen, Kit, Elder...
Quick Description: Something quick and easy to tell us what your cat looks like.( Ex. handsome ginger tom with green eyes)
Description: What does your cat look like? Are they a tabby, tortoiseshell, long-furred? Tell me all about it.
Personality: Their likes, dislikes, loves and hates. Favorites and pet peeves!
History: Everything that has happened to your cat from birth to present time.

[size=1][b]-Application-[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] Self-explanatory
[b]Gender:[/b] Male/Tom or Female/She-cat?
[b]Rank Wanted:[/b] Warrior, Apprentice, Queen, Kit, Elder...
[b]Quick Description:[/b] Something quick and easy to tell us what your cat looks like.( Ex. handsome ginger tom with green eyes)
[b]Description: [/b]What does your cat look like? Are they a tabby, tortoiseshell, long-furred? Tell me all about it.
[b]Personality:[/b] Their likes, dislikes, loves and hates. Favorites and pet peeves!
[b]History: [/b]Everything that has happened to your cat from birth to present time.[/size]

-The Clan-

Leader
Badgerstar - pretty, black and white long-furred she-cat with light green eyes

Deputy
Burnface - fire red and black tom with burn on face

Medicine Cat
OPEN

Warriors
NONE

Apprentices
NONE

Queens
NONE

Elders
NONE

[jayman]

Name: BurnFace
Gender: Tom
Rank Wanted: Deputy
Description: Fire Red and Black cat with a Burn on his face.
Personality: Before Burn: Kind and loyal, very intelligent and wise. After:Strong and Fierce, but sometimes Intelligence may lack. He would kill to protect his clan!
History: Born FlameKit, Apprenticed FlamePaw(Burned in forest fire during Apprentiship, Became feirce and always agrivated after that.), Warriored BurnFace. Parents:Goldenpelt and Dustfur(Died in forest fire.)~No siblings, Lonely life.

[02moonpelt02]

Good, so far, but maybe you could be a little more detailed in his personality and his history. Tell me who his parents were, if they are living or deceased, if he has any siblings, any past loves, what was he like before he got the burn?
Also, his name would be spelled Burnface, Flamekit, or Flamepaw. You don't capitolize the second part of the name.

[jayman]

Modified^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[02moonpelt02]

Welcome to the Clan!